Jose Hernandez
Ms. Maria Butler
English 101-Polished paper #4 First Draft
November 20, 2011
Some issues that need to be solved
The scheduling process at this school since the start has been taxing. Twice now registration has been out of my control because many students get some type of priority over me for whatever reason they may have. Twice now my schedule is not to my specifications. A problem I will now identify is the class registration and availabilities. Everyone who isn’t a priority is affected by this. The freshmen especially have to suffer and they are the ones who are new to it. Students will go on in infinity to bad scheduling if the issue is not resolved. I propose that more classes are created at more flexible times, this can be achieved by hiring more professors to accommodate slots or times that all students can benefit from .
I find that your thesis is very descriptive and lets the reader know just exactly what the meaning of the paper is going to be.
ReplyDeleteI agree with the problems of scheduling, sometimes people are able to schedule earlier than others. Which can be unfair to other people. Also, the idea of more classes and professors are good. Even if it cost the university increases, it will definitely benefit the students and it will make life easier. Although, this is a very good proposal, I am not sure if this can become a 4-5 page essay, but if you do have the ability to do it, then go for it.
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